Thursday, October 29, 2009
More Paper Problems!
I have been working on my paper and rearranged a few paragraphs along with sentences. I just changed many things in my paper and it still seems to be a little out of place. My introduction is starting out strong, but the rest of the body needs organization. How can I find a better way to do this? I watched my episode again and I also watched another episode of Angel to get more ideas which helped me with gaining more understanding. I am going to integrate more quotes because it is definitely helping me build off from them. However,what is the best way to conclude the paper? I am stuck towards the end of my paper right now because I cannot find the correct way to conclude my topic.
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I've suggested to most people that concluding on the "relevancy" will probably strengthen the paper.
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