Tuesday, November 10, 2009

More CP Issues

I finished my CP draft, but I feel like my paper focuses too much on my Analytical Research Paper. I related my two topics, Angel and criminals in general, but re-reading it reveals a bunch of stuff on Angel. I also think that I could include more examples to back up my point, but am stuck. 

1 comment:

  1. I think you should research more examples. That way you can use something other than Angel to back up your points

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